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如何写好托福作文的首段

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发表时间:2021-04-19 17:24

 完美的开始是取得成功的一半!在托福考試中,许多学员应对三、四百字的写作规定,拥有思路,却一拖再拖不知道怎样动“笔”,三十分钟的時间一分一秒消逝,文章内容品质也会伴随着心态的不一样而受影响,进而危害最后的托福考试成绩。下边,我就来给大伙儿共享一篇要怎么写好托福优秀作文第一段的类似文章,期待对大伙儿的托福考试成绩提高可以有一定的协助。

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   许多同学们针对单独写作题目涉及到的话题讨论应该是较为了解了,在开展第一段构造解读以前,期待大伙儿思索那样一个难题:单独写作中所涉及到的这种话题讨论,怎么会被ETS评委选定,放到一个国际性的语言表达考試中呢?大伙儿能够再回望一下单独写作的一些题目,她们实际上都是有一个一同的特性,那便是它所涉及到的话题讨论和內容,全是大伙儿熟识的,而且会造成大家的讨论的话题讨论,也就是学生们“广泛了解”,并能“造成讨论”。因而大家得到托福单独写作题目的2个特性:一是具备“普遍性”,二是具备“可讨论性”。

  说白了“普遍性”,便是题目涉及到的內容大家都熟识,比如,以前有那样一个题目:A/DThe telephone has greater effects on people than television.题目之中的television telephone全是大伙儿熟识的事情,至少针对全部托福学生而言,大家都肯定是再了解但是的物品了,因此 那样的事情发生在题目中,是具备公平公正的;

  说白了“可讨论性”,是指题目所涉及到的话题讨论有可讨论的使用价值,好似辩论会的观点一样,它是能够让正反面彼此进行讨论的,他的见解是辨证的。

  依据这两个特性,大家小结了一种开始段的构造,这一构造有三一部分构成:第一部分——反映普遍性;第二一部分——反映可讨论性;第三一部分——得到观点或是文章内容准备;这儿的第三一部分依据大伙儿文章内容写作思路的不一样而开展不一样的文章段落收尾就可以了,下边大家依据这一构造基础理论来开展一个题目的解读:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? To achieve successful development of a countrya government should spend more money on young childrens education(5-10) rather than on universities.你是愿意或不同意下列叫法吗?为了更好地完成一个国家的取得成功发展趋势,政府部门应当把大量的钱用在5-10岁的少儿教育上,而不是花在高校上

  这是一个教育的话题讨论,另外牵涉到政府部门付款的难题,包含2个层面的较为,一个是项目投资少儿教育,一个是项目投资高等教育。大伙儿尝试将这两个层面小结成一个事情

——the issue of how to invest in education

  或是——the issue of educational investment

  做了此项工作中以后就可以依照三一部分的构造写下开始段了。

  最先要写的是普遍性:

As is often the case, the issue of educational investment is so much concerned that it has aroused a wide discussion.

  此句中开头是以as正确引导的非约束性定语从句,as代指的是分号后边语句中的所有内容,这件事情是常常产生的情况。此句展现了难题的普遍性。随后就需要反映可讨论性了,怎样来反映呢,最先,发生可讨论性的前提条件,便是由于发生了差别,我们可以适度的过多交待一下缘故,可以下描述:

People varying in personalities as well as backgrounds tend to look at the same matter from diversified perspectives.

  他们的意思是,由于大家个性化和情况层面不尽相同,因此大家通常从不一样的视角对待同一个难题。过多以后,开展“可讨论性“的写作:

Some people maintain that investing in primary education is a wise/an optimum option, while others hold that investing in tertiary-level education is sensible/sagacious.

  将两一部分人的见解开展阐述,目地取决于根据可讨论性的反映,将题目转换成双层面的见解。以后要做的工作中便是文章段落收尾了,收尾以前也必须开展适度的埋下伏笔In taking various factors into consideration, 在其中takeinto consideration意味着“考虑到”之意,等同于consider something,以后,依据写作方法的不一样挑选不一样的收尾方法,下边给大伙儿两中挑选:

——I reckon that elementary education and high-level education are intertwined elements that are playing respective roles in the process of ones growth.

  这类收尾方法偏重中庸思想,后边的写作也多趋向于分状况讨论的思路;

——I reckon that it is the latter/former claim that makes more sense/ bears more rationality.

  这类收尾方法思路方位较为明确,一般挑选立毕业论文的学生会挑选。

  综上所述大家将本文融合归纳以下:

In recent years /As is often the case, the issue of educational investment is so much concerned that it has aroused a wide discussion. People varying in personalities as well as backgrounds tend to look at the same matter from diversified perspectives. Some people maintain that investing in primary education is an optimum option, while others hold that investing in tertiarylevel education is sensible. In taking various factors into consideration, I reckon that elementary education and highlevel education are intertwined elements that are playing respective roles in the process of ones growth.

(I reckon that it is the latter/former claim that makes more sense / bears more rationality.)

  大伙儿能够见到,在原文中数次发生初中级文化教育和高等职业教育的短语,但前文却采用了不一样的表达形式,primary education相匹配于elementary educationtertiary-leveleducation相对性应于high-level education。因而,向大伙儿注重一点是,假如在一个文章段落,或是一篇文章中,大家难以避免的会碰到反复含意的表述,此刻,期待大伙儿多多的累积同同义词的语句和短语,用以文章内容之中可能看起来语言表达更为丰富多彩。

  很多学生在学习培训之初能够适度的记诵文章段落和句子,由于提升写作搞好的方式便是摹仿和套入,大伙儿能够将以上文章段落中的下横线一部分看作模版句型,非下横线一部分能够依据题目来开展添充。下边大家运用以上模版,来训练另一道题目:In your opinion, which one is better, to spend money on something that lasts for a long time, such as valuable jewelry, or spend your money on short term pleasure such as vacation?

  对你来说,哪一种更好,花在长久時间的物品上,例如珍贵珠宝首饰,或是花在短期娱乐上,例如休闲度假?

  第一段:  As is often the case, the issue of money spending is so much concerned that it has aroused a wide discussion. People varying in personalities as well as backgrounds tend to look at the same matter from diversified perspectives. Some people maintain that spending on jewelry is a wise/ an optimum option, while others hold that spending on vacation is sensible/ sagacious. In taking various factors into considerationI reckon that material life and spiritual enjoyment are intertwined elements that are playing respective roles in daily life.

  从而,本文的第一段就完成了。

  之上便是优培锐的老师给大伙儿共享的要怎么写好托福优秀作文第一段的相关内容,优培锐的老师提议大伙儿,在写作之初,多多的学习培训范例或模板的写作,但不可忽视的是,模板性越强的文章段落应用型和协调能力越差,因此,在托福复习开展到一定水平时,期待大伙儿大量地建立自身最随手的模板文章段落或句式,而且多加练习,仅有那样,在遭遇写作题型的情况下,才可以“勇敢无畏”地一气呵成。

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